“After shooting Ray, police were tipped off …”
If the police shot Ray, was a tip to find the shooter necessary?
Oh. The AP reporter never learned about placement of modifying phrases.
http://news.yahoo.com/washington-man-killed-two-rapists-gets-life-sentence-201532126--abc-news-topstories.html
(By the time you read this, AP might have made a change.)
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