Monday, November 4, 2013

Headline: ‘Woman nearly hits officer fleeing from traffic stop’

Throw the book at officers fleeing from traffic stops!

http://www.arkansasonline.com/news/2013/nov/04/police-woman-nearly-hits-officer-fleeing-traffic-s/?latest

(An example of why not to place verb phrase far from subject. It is very easy to write: ‘Woman fleeing from traffic stop nearly hits officer.’)

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