Tuesday, November 4, 2014

In journalism classes, this headline would not have passed muster

From Tuesday’s Arkansas Democrat-Gazette:

‘Low-price diesel under holiday shoppers’ trees’

http://www.arkansasonline.com/news/2014/nov/04/low-price-diesel-under-holiday-shoppers/

Having diesel under a Christmas tree is dangerous and in case of fire most likely would negate insurance policies.

Was there not an editor around who understood placement and use of words?

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